Monday, July 18, 2011
The Tables Turned By William Wordsworth
Saturday, June 4, 2011
~ My Daddy's a Diver ~
1.
-Title
- Tells the story of an event (the father of the child in the story looses his wife, as he kills fish for a living to survive. He will never kill a fish that has a mate so the other fish is never alone and doesn’t have to suffer like he did)– it isn’t just a piece of reflective writing: there is a moral behind the story
- Has a 24-hour time period (as he goes fishing and then makes dinner)
- Meets the pattern of a short story (when he shoots the fish he reaches his goal)
- Have a restricted number of characters – Lizzie the daughter, Mother, father and deckhands.
- Dialogue (fits the type of story and the is subtle)
- Balances the showing and telling
- Uses characterization to achieve his goal
- Imagery
- Figurative language
- Changes sentence structure
2. - The story connects with the reader very effectively as the symbolic meaning of not killing the fish represents the mother and his loss of his wife.
- He doesn’t ever kill a fish with a partner, as it is a metaphor for his loss of his wife.
- The story connects to the reader via the use of empathy. The reader puts themselves in the mans shoes as he is unhappy/sad and we can all relate to this. The emotions and thoughts that come out of this story are of sadness, self-realisation and happiness. "Daddy, do fish cry? Life has moments of truth. This was one".
3. - Some of the ideas, attitudes and values that underpin this text are of self-realization. Without the man realising "Thou shalt not destroy companionship" the story would have no base and nothing to go on.
4. -Both inner and physical. Physical because his goal is to catch a fish for the human need of hunger, inner because he compares himself to the mated fish and by killing one he is evidentially condemning it to the same situation he is in now as he has lost his beloved wife.
5. - The story as a whole is very effective. It gets the point across in under 850 words and the author has used despair and love to play with the readers feelings making them want to read more. The imagery in this text is very vivid and strong. "Coarse sand patch tawny reef", the use of many adjectives in this quote help us get a proper image of the kind of conditions he was swimming in.
My Daddy’s a Diver Paragraph
My Daddy’s a Diver shows the relationship that is shown through the fish, it is a metaphor for the relationship between the father and deceased mother. Through the journey Cameron reveals the feelings of the father and how he reacts to the situation. Using short story techniques it shows how Cameron has made the major climax of the story subtle. This is done by the fathers morals being broken by killing the matted fish, being a metaphor for never killing those who love one another.
Saturday, May 7, 2011
Everyone is on a journey
Attention to Detail
Sunday, October 17, 2010
Week 3 Romeo and Juliet
Throughout the whole play Romeo and Juliet exhibit scenes about love and hate, although the passionate love that Romeo and Juliet show together over powers the hatred displayed within the play. Back in the day of Shakespeare it was proper to get married at the age of 13-16 showing maturity and love to the other half, almost 100% of the time being an arranged marriage. Though in the 21st century men and women don’t normally get married till mid twenties, as it is known to teenagers that you just don’t marry the first guy that you fall in love with, known as the high school sweet heart.
The display of passionate love is not so real in Romeo and Juliet; it is just like high school sweet hearts as know to today’s audience. Romeo seems to be disrespectful to females, wants what he says and always persuades Juliet into things she is not comfortable doing. On the other hand Juliet is an unexperienced, innocent female that may or may not be passionately in love with Romeo. Overall the couple of Romeo and Juliet show that they are not experienced together and are not truly in love.
Tuesday, May 4, 2010
Short Story Questions
The crowd is basically Sabstians friends and Jess.
2) What does the group value?
The group is seperated in two two groups. Sebastians friends vaulue him as a funny guy that they can trust and have his friendship, unlike Jess she does't think he can take anything serious although they have been going out for over a year.
3) How does the hero challenge the values?
Sebastian said that he is a funny guy although Jess doesn't realise that he can be serious and support her, if there is something wrong (e.g. she has cancer and she had bottled it all up until she exploded).